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Analysis of the Haiku structure

my mother in the mirror
dividing my hair
for braiding

ma mère dans le miroir
divisant mes cheveux
pour le tressage


Maggie Kennedy, USA
cco 2019-02-2

Commentaire.

Un étrange haïku. L2 est pivot à double sens de lecture au niveau superficiel. Il est cependant difficile de saisir exactement le sens du discours. Est-ce la mère ou l'image de la mère projetée sur celle de l'auteure ? Même parvenu à la fin de la lecture, nous ne savons pas. A noter l'archetype du Reflet dans la miroir. Bien étudier cette technique.

Keywords

mother mirror hair reflection

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm046 -

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm047 -

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm074 -

Used techniques :


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* psycho - Haiku with a psychological background.
Haiku can have a reading level that expresses an underlying psychological situation that is still active. It is not sure if this analysis is accurate. It can simply exist in the reader's mind. It is almost always absent from the author's intention, as can be seen from the author's request for information.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* pivot - Pivotal element.
Use of a pivot element as a link between two different parts of the haiku. This element belongs to both parts.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-trait - Style,subject handling


* lectures - Multiple readings. Several possible meanings.
Haiku has several possible meanings but always at the surface level. It is not a question of a layered discourse where the meaning of surface and deep differs. Not to be confused with layered discourse with a surface discourse and one or more deep discourses.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Reflet -

* T_Cycle - Cyclical Time.

* T_PassePresent - Bubble of Past.

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