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Analysis of the Haiku structure

before the rest
of the world awakens
iris shoots

avant que le reste
du monde s’éveille
pousses d’iris


Sondra Byrnes, USA
cco 2019-04-1

Commentaire.

Ce haïku fait partie de ceux, très rares, qui ne s'expliquent pas. Il a pour moi un charme magique. On le lit puis il agit.

Keywords

morning flower iris

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

Archetypes and dialectics

* T_Mince - A very thin slice of Time.

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