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après manif -
les gilets bleus filtrent
le vent


Marie Jeanne Sakhinis-De Meis, France
cco 2019-05-2

Commentaire.

Amusant ! Ce haïku vieillira cependant mal car il est basé sur une référence "culturelle", les "gilets jaunes". Qui le comprendra dans 10 ans ? A noter le glissement de sens du mot "gilet" en L2, l'allusion au bleu de la police via cette substitution et surtout le discours engagé en L3. Le message passe d'autant mieux qu'il est implcite et reconstruit par le lecteur. Un bel effet et un enseignement pour ceux qui veulent écrire l'actualité mais en disent trop et gâchent l'effet.

Keywords

police protest humour color wind

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* engagé - Committed haïku.
Haïku with a political message or opinion, an involvement


Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* ellipse - Ellipsis.
Ellipsis: Only the minimum is said but the whole situation can be reconstruct by the reader.
This is also the case when only a part of the discourse is present. The remaining part can be guessed by the reader.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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