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Analysis of the Haiku structure

pluie d'été -
dans mon mojito
un centilitre de ciel


Ben Coudert, France
cco 2019-07-2

Commentaire.

Ben a toujours des compositions sortant de l'ordinaire. Le schémà du ciel dans le récipient est fréquent mais c'est toujours en reflet. Ici, tout est original : le ciel en pluie et le contenu du verre. Il a le secret des compositions déjantées qui fonctionnent à merveille et nous étonnent à chaque fois. Il a l'oeil. Le gars à suivre.

Keywords

rain summer alcool glass humour sky

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss018 The Sky on Earth.
  Motif : mmm076 - The sky in the container.

Used techniques :


* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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