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Analysis of the Haiku structure

soleil de juillet
elle revient de la plage
vanille-framboise


Gérard Dumon, France
cco 2019-07-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur la juxtaposition d'éléments pour construire une atmosphère. J'aime bien l'économie de moyens de L3 pour nous dire en deux mots tout un tableau. Une merveille d'ellipse.

Keywords

sun beach summer taste ice_cream

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* ellipse - Ellipsis.
Ellipsis: Only the minimum is said but the whole situation can be reconstruct by the reader.
This is also the case when only a part of the discourse is present. The remaining part can be guessed by the reader.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* ellipse - Ellipsis.
Ellipsis: Only the minimum is said but the whole situation can be reconstruct by the reader.
This is also the case when only a part of the discourse is present. The remaining part can be guessed by the reader.

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