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shade of the church
she says she’ll show me hers
if I show her mine


Garry Eaton, Canada
cco 2019-07-2

Commentaire.

Tout en allusions, un haïku intimiste et délicat. L1 ajoute cependant une touche plus sombre qui en dit plus long sur le contexte. N'empêche, la fraîcheur et l'innocence de l'enfance, (mais sous surveillance). l'opposition de deux mondes.

Keywords

shadow erotic religion humour child

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

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