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Analysis of the Haiku structure

mouvement social -
quelques mouettes vocifèrent
sur la grève


Ben Coudert, France
cco 2019-08-1

Commentaire.

Ce haïku comme beaucoup d'autres de l'auteur trouve son activité sur la juxtaposition et le jeu de mots, ou plutôt le glissement de sens. A noter qu'il faut attendre le dernier mot pour que le haïku fonctionne. Cette technique oblige le lecteur à une réévaluation du discours et en renforce donc l'effet.

Keywords

social bird cry humour sound seagull

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* glissement - Shifting from one meaning to another.
Shift of discourse from one meaning to another. It's the whole discourse that changes meaning. Not to be confused with the surprise, which is an unexpected element that does not deeply change the meaning of the discourse.

* association - Associations.
Images in association. Interaction comes from the sharing of only a part of the semes. There are no similarities or oppositions that create a dynamic. However, the relationship is stronger than in the juxtaposition that places images side by side without semantic relationships between them.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_Nature -

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