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power outage
the distant sound
of a saxophone

panne de courant
le son lointain
d'un saxophone


Mark Miller, USA
cco 2019-08-1

Commentaire.

Haïku impliquant plusieurs sens. Il y a une curieuse impression que le son lointain supplée la manque de lumière. On peut aussi y lire l'archetype de la Vie malgré tout dans ce saxo humain, survivant à l'arrêt (la Chute) du monde artificiel. Etrange haïku où le kigo (mot de référence) ne provient pas de la Nature mais de notre monde technologique.

Keywords

power_outage sound musique saxophone

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm064 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

* - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

* T_Lent - Slow Time.

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