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Analysis of the Haiku structure

shaking sky...
in the wheatfield
a scurry of mice

ciel secoué....
dans le champ de blé
une bousculade de souris


Grace Galton, UK
cco 2019-08-1

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur des oppositions Grand versus Petit (orage versus souris), Haut versus Bas. Mais sa force me semble être dans l'image archetypale de ce petit peuple agité par la colère céleste.

Keywords

sky thunderstorm mouse field

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

* inversion - Inversion of sentence order.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Fragilité - Fragility, tenuousness.

Quelque chose de fragile dans un univers "hostile". Qui emporte en lui quelque chose.

David, le petit être.

* A_Ciel - The Sky.

Le Ciel. L'immensité de ce qui est au-dessus de nous. Sans connotation religieuse.

Souvent lié aux dialectiques D_HautBas et D_GrandPetit.

* A_Sauvage - The Wildness, Freedom.

Le monde sauvage en opposition avec notre vie de tous les jours.

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

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