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Analysis of the Haiku structure

écho de dispute~
au fond du jardin les grenades
éclatées


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2019-09-2

Commentaire.

Le double sens du mot ‘grenade’ fonctionne toujours très bien.

Keywords

sound argument fruit garden violence

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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