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Analysis of the Haiku structure

marché bondé~
trois grenades planquées
entre les oranges


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2019-10-2

Commentaire.

Haïku d'une parfaite ambiguïté. Il existe en effet plusieurs lectures possibles au niveau superficiel. Surtout pour les coincés de la peur, de plus en plus nombreux. Le discours est intéressant car malgré une réinterprétation en fin, obligatoire pour en dégager le sens, on ne peut se décider. Subtilité de la construction qui lui donne sa force causée par la résonnance en mémoire court-terme et les liens dans notre Imaginaire.

Keywords

market fruit orange

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* lectures - Multiple readings. Several possible meanings.
Haiku has several possible meanings but always at the surface level. It is not a question of a layered discourse where the meaning of surface and deep differs. Not to be confused with layered discourse with a surface discourse and one or more deep discourses.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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