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première gelée
l’aspic de saumon tremblote
dans l’assiette


Joëlle Ginoux-Duvivier, France
cco 2019-12-1

Commentaire.

Un exemple de haïku basé sur une similitude et un jeu de mots. L1 possède un kigo (marqueur de saison) qui en fait est un élement autre. Il y a glissement de sens entre L1 et L2. Une technique qui donne de l'activité au discours lors de son interprétation en mémoire court-terme. Cet effet est généralement utilisé en fin, obligeant à une réinterprétation. On le trouve rarement comme ici en L1.

Keywords

frost fish food humour autumn

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* glissement - Shifting from one meaning to another.
Shift of discourse from one meaning to another. It's the whole discourse that changes meaning. Not to be confused with the surprise, which is an unexpected element that does not deeply change the meaning of the discourse.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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