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cielo di nubi
dell'aereo soltanto
il suo motore

ciel nuageux
de l'avion seulement
son moteur

cloudy sky
of the airplane
its engine only


Brando Altemps, Italy
cco 2012-06-2

Commentaire.

Archetype : Une chose invisible (avion) perçue par un détail (son).

Keywords

cloud plane sound

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss031 The call, the scream. Something's draw attention without being visible.
  Motif : mmm057 - Sounds of something not visible.

Used techniques :


* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the A_PointActif.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. Archetypes are structures that have aggregated semes (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

e.g. Night, Fire, Death, Fall, Frontier...

Night: gloomy, dark, cold, threatening (lack of visibility of potential dangers), dangerous (legacy of ancient times), loss of Light, linked to the Unconscious through dreams and nightmares, silent world, mysterious, unknown, populated by fantastical beings.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Indice - The clue, the sign, the revealing detail.

Quelque chose, un détail, nous révèle une chose cachée ou invisible.

* A_ChoseCachee - The hidden Thing.

Quelque chose de non visible a une activité qui se révèle de diverses manières. Il ne s'agit pas d'une Chose Enfouie, notion en relation avec l'Inconscient, mais simplement non visible.

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