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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Mon soutien-gorge est tombé
Tête d'ange
Doigts chevronnés


Kunzeï Habashli, France
cco 2015-12-1

Commentaire.

Tout est dit. Heureux homme et heureuse femme. Voici une structure en "liste de commission". On pose les éléments. Et cela marche grâce au lecteur. Cette technique montre bien comment fonctionne le haïku. Dans ce cas, rassembler quelques crochets, des lignes de pêche dans notre vécu. Le résultat est obtenu si on n'en dit pas trop. Mettre juste le nécessaire pour créer une ouverture à la fin et laisser tout faire par le lecteur.

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Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* concordance - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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