Analysis of the Haiku structure
Les jardins d'Alep en 2016
a laissé sa coquille et s'est enfui
Mohamad Alsari, Syria
Humour noir des haïkus de guerre. Ce qui reste quand tout espoir est parti.
war refugee Syria humour
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.
A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.
Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects
At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.
Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)
* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed (structural element 'clos') and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).
It gives a view on one of the elements of the situation.
Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.
At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.
Description level: 3-aut - Author's role
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