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summer solstice
the sun reaches the cobwebs
in the corner

solstice d'été
le soleil atteint les toiles d'araignées
dans le coin


Bill Waters, USA
cco 2016-06-2

Commentaire.

Schéma fréquent : marquer la progression du soleil dans sa cours par un repère familier. Ce répère est souvent un aboutissement aussi (fond du jardin, haut d'un mur...). On joue alors sur la similitude avec un effet d'opposition Grand versus Petit. Le solstice marque aussi un repère dans le Temps mais aussi dans le Cycle du temps, deux archétypes qui règlent nos vies.

Keywords

solstice_1 sun cobweb humour

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss012 Moon/Sun passes through a place.
  Motif : mmm008 - Sun/moon crosses a room.

Used techniques :


* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. Archetypes are structures that have aggregated semes (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

e.g. Night, Fire, Death, Fall, Frontier...

Night: gloomy, dark, cold, threatening (lack of visibility of potential dangers), dangerous (legacy of ancient times), loss of Light, linked to the Unconscious through dreams and nightmares, silent world, mysterious, unknown, populated by fantastical beings.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Cycle - Cycle of Time.

Le cycle des saisons, des années, des vies. Cela peut être répétitif comme les saisons ou à un seul cycle avec une croissance suivie d'une chute.

* A_Temps - Time.

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.


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