Analysis of the Haiku structure
on the pikit weir
on the barbed-wire
wool and wind
au fil barbelé
de la laine et du vent
John McDonald, Scotland (UK)
Structure of this haiku.
Schema and motifs :
Schéma : sss033 Animated trace objects.
Motif : mmm094 - Hair, feathers hung.
Used techniques :
* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.
This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.
The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.
The atmosphere is mostly characterized by slow or motionless time.
Effects: liasen - Binding with sensorial feelings.
At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.
Description level: 3-suj - Subject, content
* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.
Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious
At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.
Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)
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