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Analysis of the Haiku structure

snaggit
on the pikit weir
woo'n wund

snagged
on the barbed-wire
wool and wind

accrochés
au fil barbelé
de la laine et du vent


John McDonald, Scotland (UK)
cco 2016-12-1

Keywords

barbed_wire cold

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss033 Animated trace objects.
  Motif : mmm094 - Hair, feathers hung.

Used techniques :


* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.

This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.

The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.

The atmosphere is mostly characterized by slow or motionless time.

Effects: liasen - Binding with sensorial feelings.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-suj - Subject, content


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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