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Analysis of the Haiku structure

writing haiku ...
my wine glass fills
with sunlight

écrire un haiku ...
mon verre de vin se remplie
de soleil


Liu Chen-ou, Canada
cco 2016-12-1

Keywords

writing haiku glass sun light wine alcool

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* association - Associations.
Images in association. Interaction comes from the sharing of only a part of the semes. However, the relationship is stronger than in the juxtaposition that places images side by side without semantic relationships (sharing of semes) between them.

ex: fireworks (small dots - luminous - close - ephemeral) and
stars (small dots - bright - distant - eternal)

Here, the association is based on the first two elements of description (semes)

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. Archetypes are structures that have aggregated semes (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

e.g. Night, Fire, Death, Fall, Frontier...

Night: gloomy, dark, cold, threatening (lack of visibility of potential dangers), dangerous (legacy of ancient times), loss of Light, linked to the Unconscious through dreams and nightmares, silent world, mysterious, unknown, populated by fantastical beings.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* progression - Advance.
Structure with a spatial or time oriented advance.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Lumière - The Light.

La Lumière.
A mettre en relation avec la Lumière dans la Nuit.

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