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Analysis of the Haiku structure

foule au souk
les abricots en cageots
suffoquent


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-05-1

Commentaire.

Il s'agit d'un transfert. En fait, ce sont les gens qui suffoquent. L'auteure a fait un raccourci qui exprime bien l'idée. Economie du discours.

Keywords

fruit warmth humour crowd

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* perso - Personification.
Personification. Projection of human feelings or behaviours on things or animals.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)


* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed (structural element 'clos') and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

It gives a view on one of the elements of the situation.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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