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Analysis of the Haiku structure

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canicule~
dans le mûrier chuchotent
les moineaux


Sarra Masmoudi, Tunisie
cco 2017-05-1

Commentaire.

Venant du monde arabe, ce haïku me fait penser à un traité ancien La Conférence aux Oiseaux de Farid al-Din ’Attâr. Est-ce que ce texte à joué un rôle dans la capture de cette image ?

Keywords

warmth bird humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

A mechanism similar to the geographic element (geo) that assumes that the reader is familiar with the geographic environment referred to by the author.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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