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Analysis of the Haiku structure

walking meditation --
I pass through
a cloud of breath

(marchant en méditant --
je passe à travers
un nuage d'haleine)

Cindy Zackowitz, USA
cco 2002-09-1


cloud breath daydream walk meditation

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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