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Analysis of the Haiku structure

drying shed—
a hint of thyme
in the onions

hangar de séchage—
un soupçon de thym
dans les oignons

Marilyn Fleming, USA
cco 2018-10-1


Haïku d'odeurs. Celui-ci est spécial. Il ne note qu'une minuscule impression dans une tranche infime de temps. C'est justement ce qui lui donne sa force. Il agit comme une étincelle dans notre perception, avec une intensité qui lui donne de la persistence longtemps, comme une odeur...


smell farm barn

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the A_PointActif.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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