Year 2013 : from January 16th to 31th
Piazza deserta
coi resti del mercato
e sono solo
Desert square
with remnants of the market
I am alone
Place déserte
avec les restes du marché
je suis seul
Paul Anthony
Loughborough UK
pioggia o neve
mentre cammino penso
alla mia casa
rain or snow
when I am walking
I think of my home
pluie et neige
quand je marche
je pense à ma maison
Tarquinio Brodo
Southampton England
thunder snow
the wind-shifting scent
of fox
tonnerre de neige
amenée par le vent l'odeur
du renard
Publications credits: fox dreams (April 2012) edited by Aubrie Cox
Alan Summers
Chippenham, Wiltshire England
Gare du Nord
the slow change of snow
on fake fur
Gare du Nord
le lent changement de la neige
sur une fausse fourrure
Publications credits: Blithe Spirit (Vol. 22 no. 2 May 2012)
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L3 creates the opening at the end of this haiku having a so strange atmosphere.
Juxtaposition of the "death" of the snow and the death "intended" in the fur even if it is fake. That creates the emb ... >>> la suite...
Alan Summers
Chippenham, Wiltshire England
almost lost
among the shifting hues
of dusk
the faint calligraphy
of swans
red lights V9 N1 January 2013
Chambre funéraire / Dernière visite à mon père / Blanc pur de la neige
Kukai de Paris
Danièle Etienne-Georgelin
Chaumont S/Loire France
Translated into English with the assistance of www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)