Year 2022 : from November 16th to 30th
ronde des flocons
et je touille et je touille
mon café sans sucre
in "d'une rive à l'autre", Ed. unicité, 2022
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Haïku based on the usual oppositions Interior versus Exterior, Hot versus Cold BUT its activity does not lie there. It is rather the similarity of the white of the flakes and the sugar (absent) and t ... >>> la suite...
Patrick Fetu
Taverny France
solstice de printemps
le bruit des bombes
crève l'écran
in Aux côtés de Santoka, ed. unicité, 2021
Danièle Duteil
Locoal-Mendon, Morbihan France
overloaded cart
in the donkey’s eyes
dusk deepens
charrette surchargée
dans les yeux de l'âne
le crépuscule gagne
Mann Library’s Daily Haiku - Day 14
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Haiku of "end of the world / doomsday" atmosphere for the donkey. The speech is supported, not by a weather reference, but by a moment of the day, which since the beginning of time (human) is frighten ... >>> la suite...
Hifsa Ashraf
Rawalpindi, Punjab Pakistan
dinner alone
the aroma of garam masala
mixed with fog
dîner seule
l'arôme du garam masala
mélangé au brouillard
Mann Library’s Daily Haiku - Day 15
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A strange discourse. The atmosphere of solitude is carried by a strong opposition between the spice mix and the fog. Both in terms of the sensation of heat and color. The garam is "hot" (according to ... >>> la suite...
Hifsa Ashraf
Rawalpindi, Punjab Pakistan
junkyard truck
. . . rust flaking
onto fallen leaves
camion de ferrailleur
. ... la rouille s'écaille
sur les feuilles mortes
Facebook, 2022-11-29
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Similarity of colors, but also of fates. That of the leaves, that of the metals. The discourse is thus also carried by the archetype of the Fall but one can also see there that of the Cycle of the thi ... >>> la suite...
Bill Waters
Pennington, New Jersey USA
the glow
in a stray cat's eyes
sickle moon
la lueur
dans les yeux d'un chat errant
croissant de lune
Cattails October 2022
Sandi Pray
Robbinsville, North Carolina USA
thé au gingembre
le gris grignote le bleu
du ciel landais
Facebook, 2022-11-19
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This haiku is based on a motif of oppositions between Interior and Exterior, between Hot (tea) versus Cold (assumed by the gray of the sky). Added to this is the taste of ginger, both fresh and hot, i ... >>> la suite...
Evelyne Bélard
Angaïs, Aquitaine France
Ruisseau tranquille
l’éclair bleu de mon premier
martin-pêcheur
in L'intrus aux chouchous roses, Ed. Via Domitia, 2022
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This haiku is based on the effect of suddenness but especially on the archetype of the active point of blue color. This point in this color is a perception that has a particular effect in our unconsci ... >>> la suite...
Jean-Paul Gallmann
Lauterbourg France
Balade avec jumelles
il observe
le deuxième kilomètre
in L'intrus aux chouchous roses, Ed. Via Domitia, 2022
Jean-Paul Gallmann
Lauterbourg France
Le bruit des chenilles
dans les rues ukrainiennes
explosion de jonquilles
in Bruissement d'ailes, , Ed. Via Domitia, 2022
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The Life that overcomes the Death. A strong archetype at work in this discourse. Note that this one flips and changes meaning just at the last word, forcing the reader to re-evaluate the overall meani ... >>> la suite...
Françoise Maurice
France
pluie de l'aube
déjà sur les pavés
les lumières des bureaux
Facebook, 2022-11-17
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The motif on which this haiku is based, an opposition of Heaven in the puddle, is treated in a derivative way. It is not Heaven but the Light of the tall office buildings. Note that, in this image, th ... >>> la suite...
Marie-France Evrard
Bruxelles Belgique
trainspottin -
myndin the auld puffers
...freesty braith
trainspotting -
remembering the old puffers
...frosty breath
(amateur de trains -
se souvenant des vieilles vapeurs
... l'haleine givrée)
trainspotting : amateur et observateur de trains et matériel ferrovière.
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Complex discourse and difficult to understand for those who are not from the milieu. It speaks about the enthusiasts of old railway equipment (steam locomotives, particularly honored in England). Beyo ... >>> la suite...
John McDonald
Edinburgh Scotland (UK)
fauteuil de jardin -
de tout son long
un escargot s'étire
Carnet d'un Haijin
Damien Gabriels
Leers France
Alzheimer's ward
she whistles a song
I don't know
Alzheimer-Station
sie pfeift ein Lied
das ich nicht kenne
Unité Alzheimer
elle sifffle une chanson
que je ne connais pas
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Haiku with a discourse based on surprise and the shift in meaning. One would have expected something else in L3 and is surprised; the meaning of the discourse changes, forcing the reader to re-evaluat ... >>> la suite...
Eva Limbach
Saarbrücken Germany
morning shave
pulling my face
into dad's face
Scarlet Dragonfly Journal, Nov. 2022
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Haiku with a discourse of meeting between the author and an image of the past, which is similar to him, his father. It is a classic motif of literature, that of the Reflection in the Mirror. The Othe ... >>> la suite...
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