Year 2023 : from April 1st to 15th
premier jour d'avril
les yeux glauques des poissons
sur les étals
Facebook, 2023-04-01
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Grating humor in a discourse juxtaposing joy (L1) and Death (L2). One can also see a shift in meaning of the word "fish" in L2. A disturbing haiku, and therefore one that marks the mind. An effective ... >>> la suite...
Marie Jeanne Sakhinis-De Meis
Sète France
monsoon in Rawalpindi
meandering through the alley
colorful paper boats
mousson à Rawalpindi
serpentant dans la ruelle
bateaux de papiers colorés
in the Vol. 10, April 2023 of Seashores.
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A discourse carried by a double opposition. The one between the Color of the small boats (archetype of the Active Point) and the greyness of the rain and the monsoon sky. The other between the power o ... >>> la suite...
Hifsa Ashraf
Rawalpindi, Punjab Pakistan
mon oreiller
à peine secoué
prunier en fleurs
Facebook, 2023-04-01
Elsa Querne
Pontault Combault France
another year
away from home
plum blossoms
une année de plus
loin de la maison
fleurs de prunier
Hemapriya Chellappan for publishing my haiku in Issue 88 of the failed haiku.
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An elliptical discourse, the author makes a personal remark (L1 L2) then leaves the reader in another calm and serene context so that his Imagination continues alone the first discourse. L3 appears as ... >>> la suite...
Mona Bedi
Delhi India
under the arches
an orchestra of beer cans
left in the rain
sous les arches
un orchestre de canettes de bière
laissées sous la pluie
Twitter, 2023-04-01
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Discourse composed of a simple folded sentence. One can however find there three images put in connection by juxtaposition. There is also, on a deeper level, an association between the sound of cans a ... >>> la suite...
ciel d'orage
le champ de colza
s'allume
Facebook, 2023-04-07
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Haiku whose engine is the Light (major archetype). It is present in the yellow color of the field and in the lightning announced in L3. There is a kind of magic of color in the sudden opposition betwe ... >>> la suite...
Isabelle Lamant Meunier
Aubervilliers France
de plus en plus petit
dans mon rétroviseur
l'arc-en-ciel
Carnets d'un Haïjin, avril 2023
Damien Gabriels
Leers France
coupant les branches mortes
de l'arbre à papillons
- Vendredi saint
Damien Gabriels
Leers France
on a cauld mornin
the birsle
o gean treen
on a cold morning
the warmth
of cherry trees
par un matin froid
la chaleur
des cerisiers
zen speug
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A beautiful multisensory opposition between the cold (real) of the morning and the heat (subjective and projected) of the cherry blossoms. An opposition on only one part of the semes of the two elemen ... >>> la suite...
John McDonald
Edinburgh Scotland (UK)
heure du s'hour* ~
en lamelles sur la table
le clair de lune
*Dernier repas en fin de nuit avant d'entamer la journée de jeûne.
Sarra Masmoudi
Tunis Tunisie
soir stalinien
cinq immeubles rouges
en rangs parfaits
Facebook, 2023-04-08
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Haiku whose subject is, as they say, "that the less than twenty years old can't know"... There is indeed a rather old cultural (historical) allusion, but always interesting to remember. To note the be ... >>> la suite...
Isabelle Férandin
France
sous l'abri bus
furtivement
son rouge à lèvres
Facebook, 2023-04-08
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Haiku with a folded sentence but with a perfect zoom structure. The glance dives to the lipstick. An Active Point (archetype) seen for a moment at the end. This arrangement gives it more strength and ... >>> la suite...
Isabelle Férandin
France
fresh graffiti
the dog approves
by signing
graffiti récent
le chien approuve
en signant
Nick Virgilio Haiku Association, April 7-21, 2021
Alan Summers
Chippenham, Wiltshire England
full moon chat —
the heart she gives
to a bad haiku
tchat de la pleine lune —
le cœur qu'elle donne
à un mauvais haïku
Twitter, 2023-04-03
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A curious discourse where the various meanings of the word "heart" are mixed together to create activity. The discourse also has two active levels in parallel but they are not different readings but r ... >>> la suite...
Nair Dapayan
Silchar, Assam India
Translated into English with the assistance of www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)