Year 2023 : from July 1st to 15th
first date --
eating the oysters
he used to hate
premier rendez-vous --
il mange les huîtres
qu'il détestait
Facebook, 2023-07-01
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A haiku without kigo (seasonal word)? Yes and no. Nowadays, there a form of writing that uses known and shared contexts as a context reference (instead of season). Like here, in L1. Note the indirect ... >>> la suite...
Carol Raisfeld
Atlantic Beach, New-York USA
La lune
au fond de l'arrosoir
ballet de moustiques
Le Coucou du haïku, 2023-07-02
Bernard Dujaudy
France
Une flaque sur ma route
la lune se trouble.
opposition L2 soudain mmm015
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A haiku in two lines, but with two elements. Why add a third element that would make a cheville if everything has been said? Note that the author avoids staging himself and uses a roundabout way (my ... >>> la suite...
Bernard Dujaudy
France
soir d'été
les pétales des jasmins collés
à la canne de l'aveugle
Le Coucou du haïku, 2023-07-01
Olfa Kchouk Bouhadida
Tunis Tunisie
lendemain d'émeute -
la trace de l'escargot
s'étire en silence
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A marvellous discourse in which two worlds are juxtaposed. Ours" and that of the snail, outside our Time, living at its own pace and "going its own way"... Everything is said about the vanity and inan ... >>> la suite...
Richard Breitner
Paris France
lendemain d'émeute -
sur les carcasses calcinées
les vrilles des glycines
Un Haïku par jour, 2023-07-02
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A haiku based on the archetypes of Life overcoming obstacles and of Fragility. Note the strong opposition between L2 and L3: Death and Life, which we ultimately keep. The tendrils also play the role ... >>> la suite...
Richard Breitner
Paris France
humeur vagabonde
la courge dévale
le tas de compost
Un Haïku par jour, 2023-07-03
Mido Yorokobi
France
confidences ~
l'ombre du parasol
rétrécit
Un Haïku par jour, 2023-07-01
Sarra Masmoudi
Tunis Tunisie
chants de noce
à la fenêtre
la lune resplendit
Un Haïku par jour, 2023-07-03
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Haiku of atmosphere using a particular pattern: the moon at the window. A relationship is created between L1 (wedding) and L3 (moon), as if the moon were watching the wedding. But the author hasn't us ... >>> la suite...
Sarra Masmoudi
Tunis Tunisie
frost moon --
again a single line
on the pregnancy kit
lune de givre --
encore une fois une seule ligne
sur le kit de grossesse
Haiku in Action, June 28th - July 2nd
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An atmosphere haiku that uses an element of weather to set the psychological context. The author doesn't say anything explicitly, but the reader understands and complements it with his or her own expe ... >>> la suite...
Mona Bedi
Delhi India
chambre inconnue -
une odeur d'iode apportée
par le vent d'ouest
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Haiku in indirect discourse. The author doesn't explicitly say that the sea is near, but the reader infers this on his or her own. This mechanism makes the appropriation more profound and more effecti ... >>> la suite...
Christophe Kochowski
France
heavy rain
the earthy smell
of the funeral
pluie battante
l'odeur de terre
de l'enterrement
Hedgerow Journal, May 2023
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A haiku of atmosphere. The heavy rain is called up to create atmosphere; the smell of earth to evoke the Chtonian, the world of the Deep. A heavy atmosphere. Time is slow or motionless; rather motionl ... >>> la suite...
Wai Mei Wong
Toronto, ON Canada
Translated into English with the assistance of www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)